Tylangela the Great

I love the colors used here, but think that the greenish-yellow color should either be lighter or darker to stand off from the golden yellow color.
Your palette is pleasing, but some parts need to pop a bit more in order to bring the piece into focus. small touches, like brighten the pinks, or something.
very subtly.
the bottom of the piece is worrisome. for compositional purposes, try to leave enough black space at the bottom for your eye to rest and not be focused on it, or
cut off the figure at the hip. either more, or less. it seems like you weren't sure where to put him, and making a more extreme judgment in this case would help that.

the sweeping lines behind the rest of the grotesque forms seem haphazard and muddy. I like the dash of red, it coincides with the red on the figure and splotches of red you have elsewhere,
but it needs to be either less deliberate or more deliberate. again, its like you couldn't decide and you just went for it. which is great! but it helps to make a stronger piece when you play with extremes,
contrasts, different perspectives, color, all that.

all in all I think its one of your strongest pieces. I don't think it needs much of a push, but maybe just a few little baby touches. or, the next one you do, try to implement what I've talked about.
I don't want you to change your vision, just try and be more concrete and either more daring or more subtle (or a combo of both) with what you do (lines, strokes, shapes, colors, etc).

does this make sense? I'm so tired man.